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Oola was dancing for joy when she learned that Luke Skywalker was coming to Jabba's palace. With newfound hope from Luke's promise for her freedom, Oola danced, like she had never danced before. She danced so good in fact, that Jabba wanted more from the young dancer. Oola refused it. Jabba was so angry at her, that he smashed the trap door button and Oola was instantly thrown into the rancor pit. When she was in the rancor pit, Oola got herself up and looked up at the idiots that were cheering like hell. Oola got a fright when she heard a loud clank. Then suddenly the rancor door opened itself up and the hideous rancor showed its ugly face. Her heart started to pump. It slowly moved towards her. Oola screamed loudly. She thought she was going to be eaten by the rancor, until apart of the ceiling crashed open and a young man jumped down and stood in front of her.
"Who are you?" she said terrified.
"No time for that." he said. "Listen, I'll make you a deal. I'll save your life and get you away from here, if you will join me and on my adventures."
Oola didn't want to die, so she quickly accepted the deal. The young man pulled out his watch, which was hidden under his sleeve. He then activated it. Some holograms of weird creatures suddenly showed up.
The young man said to Oola, "Oola, its hero time!"
He then slapped down one of the holograms, and suddenly right before her eyes, was a giant dinosaur that screamed out the name, "Humangasuar!"
Oola was surprised at this young man. Humangasuar ran to the rancor and gave it the biggest punch across its face. He then grabbed it by its neck and punched it in its stomach mutable times, then gave it a massive sky uppercut from under its neck. The rancor smashed into the wall. And to finish it off, Humangasuar picked it up by its tail and spun it around, and around, and around, and then threw it back into its cage. And to make sure the rancor couldn't get out, he punched the door's button so hard, it quickly shut and completely locked itself. Humangasuar then turned and walked over to Oola, then a beam of light appeared and the dinosaur was gone, leaving in its place was the young man.
"Jason". The young man said.
"What?" Oola replied.
"My name, It's Jason." he said.
Oola smiled and replied "Oola."
"I know. I asked one of the cheering idiots who you were. I watched you dance. It was beautiful." Jason said.
"Thank you." Oola said quietly as she looked deeply into Jason's eyes. She was in love.
"Time to go" Jason said.
Jason put his arm around Oola's waist and activated his watch again. This time the hologram showed a tiger-like creature on it. He then slapped his watch again and in his place again was a very vicious looking tiger, who then yelled out the name, "Rath!" Rath jumped up and busted the viewing grate. When he got through, the viewers screamed and got away as fast as they could. Even Boba Fett was scared of Rath. Only Jabba and his friends stayed behind. Rath put Oola's feet on the ground and then snarled at Jabba. He then started to shout.
"LET ME TELL YOU SOMETHING, JABBA THE HUTT!!! NOBODY THROWS THIS BEAUTIFUL WOMAN INTO THE RANCOR PIT, WITHOUT GETTING A MAJOR BEATING FROM RATH!!!"
Everything went silent until Jabba started laughing.
He then said, "No one has ever been able to defeat my pet rancor. You must be very strong. Since I'm a nice guy, my gift to you for showing me that you have got some guts, is Oola."
Rath turned back into Jason. Jason thanked Jabba.
Jabba then said, "Now leave my palace, before i change my mind."
Jason took Oola back to his ship. He then took her back to his planet, Earth, where they got married and had 2 kids named Luke and Zelda. They both lived happily with each other. The End!
My first Fan fiction. hope it's good.
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Redfin950 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
It's good, I just don't like Ben 10 but other than that it's good
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sliferbenten Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
thank you. i had this story in my head sinch i first watched episode 6. and i liked oola, but when i saw what jabba did, in my head, my oc jumps in and saves her.
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Redfin950 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
I wish Oola didn't die and Luke saved her when he went into the rancor pit
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sliferbenten Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
origionly that was the plan: [link]
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Redfin950 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
It's a nice tribute....wish I could see it
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sliferbenten Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
so do i.
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Redfin950 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
*sob face*
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sliferbenten Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:(
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lordhadrian Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
:) Nice
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sliferbenten Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
thank you. )
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